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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2006-12-31 06:43 PM


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The ship’s clock
Will strike twelve bells

And out in a field
Of new snow
Across the road

I will see my father
Again like a little boy

Shooting his shotgun
Into the air


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-12-31 10:27 PM


Great imagery!
Very much enjoyed!
Happy New Year!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-12-31 10:34 PM



The memories
that lead one forward

are the most
treasured.

Thank you, John.


trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
Posts 820
CA
3 posted 2006-12-31 11:48 PM


Brings back memories of me and my dad 2. Thanks for stirring the imagination
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
4 posted 2007-04-24 03:13 PM


what a warm memory in the cold field.
searching the lost sound in the quiet snow.
father, the love and strength
forever live with our soul.

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