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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2006-12-31 10:45 AM

Twas a kiss that awoke this heart of mine
from the sleep that death had brought to it.
For long before this I had chosen thine,
yet, love deemed this heart beneath unfit.

The date of love hath passed so long before,
like Summer's warm touch on Winter's bliss.
Yet, it lives through dormant dreams no more,
for love was shown through a simple kiss.

What a kiss it was to a wounded heart.
Though it lacked in time, it governed love.
For it's power tore night and day apart,
to prove to thee that none reigns above.

It was, though, waking to the sun clad sea,
as the notes of song birds filled the air
and drops of nectar fulfilling thy plea,
twas the kiss of love that I must swear!

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Poet deVine

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1 posted 2006-12-31 10:56 AM

This is beautiful! It has a very old fashioned tone and I love it. You're right on with the rhythm too.

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2006-12-31 11:00 AM

Devine thank you so much..That is a huge compliment coming from you. I have read many of your poems. ~Bill

Martie

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3 posted 2006-12-31 11:50 AM

lovely to read....and yes, a feel of the old poets in one so young...enjoyed the smooth rich flow.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-12-31 12:37 PM

Nice...James

wredgranny
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5 posted 2006-12-31 01:20 PM

It was, though, waking to the sun clad sea,
as the notes of song birds filled the air
and drops of nectar fulfilling thy plea,
twas the kiss of love that I must swear!

Sigi Usti Vigido,it amazes me this soft sweetness that seem to simply pour forth.Is a dear and gentle heart can find such words within!

granny!

scorpio
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6 posted 2006-12-31 03:12 PM

A pleasure to read this Bill. Much enjoyed!!

Tom Zart
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7 posted 2006-12-31 04:44 PM

Wonderful love poem thanks for posting it.

trutodaraiders
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8 posted 2007-01-01 12:36 PM

wredgranny
A broken heart can reverse itself and become humble. I have passion for life and fire in my heart for love. Thank You Kindly for your lovely comment

scorpio
Thanks for stopping bye and reading. Much so for leaving a comment.

Tom Zart
Thanks for taking the time to read and leaving a comment

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-01-06 03:23 AM

Bill.... loved reading this!
RDB

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