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Come back Baby
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Come back Baby |
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oblivion123 New Member
since 2006-12-30
Posts 1 |
Come Back baby All day and night long its you who Im missing Im trying to understand its meaning I see you when im on the road riding I see you when im sleeping I see you when im studying I see you when im thinking You have invaded my thoughts and soul Without you baby, I cant be whole You are like a diamond in a mine of coal Without you Baby,my life is just an empty hole I cant wait till you come back here all the barriers, we can clear Fate has brought about my worst fear and i felt what it is like being away from you my dear If you cant be in my life anymore Atleast after death, we can be together im sure Not just heart and soul,you are my core Without you Baby ,my life isnt the same anymore |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Touching first post here. Enjoyed reading your thoughts. TD |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Enjoyed the read. A few grammer errors. Understand the feeling of someone completing you. ~Bill |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
You have invaded my thoughts and soul Without you baby, I cant be whole You are like a diamond in a mine of coal Without you Baby,my life is just an empty hole Sigi Oblivio123 I am no one to say much about the thing call love,for adanvdo has never be involve but enjoy I do the beauty and softness share by you!
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Read Mark Strand |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Welcome to Passions... you will love it here in the blue pages!  Enjoyed your first post.. Be Well RDB |
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