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tripoli89
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since 2006-12-29
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Illinion

0 posted 2006-12-30 01:50 AM


keep on looking
your just fooling yourself
dont worry about me
there is always somebody else

thinking out of the box
getting trapped in
no more keys to the locks
no one left but me

embrace the cold
no more emotions to hold
numb to the feelings of old
this is what happens when life take control

nothing left to hide
no more need to cry
is this how life is suppose to be
i cant help but feel empty

judge me again
nothing more to tell
label me again
i'll jus besomebody else

walking these roads alone
trying to find the way home



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trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
Posts 820
CA
1 posted 2006-12-30 02:20 AM


A few grammer errors. Understand the feling in this poem. ~Bill

label me again
i'll jus besomebody else

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-12-30 06:02 AM


welcome to Passions


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