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How to Paint
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How to Paint |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite How to Paint Sink into the thing you see Make it all a part of three Search the length and breathe of it It’s inner core, its sense of fit Breathe its very dense of breath Feel its awe and sense of death Blend into its ring and chime How it deals its part in time Grow with it till full in grace Take its stand in common place Nourish on the inner glow Reap the essence you must know Live with it a one on one Stay with it till you are done Then take a brush in faint and Paint and paint and paint and paint Till you see its spirits goal It’s than you’ve painted its soul |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
very, very nice! I particularly liked: "Breathe its very dense of breath Feel its awe and sense of death Blend into its ring and chime How it deals its part in time" Reading this 're-write' certainly 'picked up' my morning! Applause! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nod.... if this is my answer, I will pray for humility.  Consider this, that I've knocked twice. and I do not give up easily. I want to be better before I die. keep telling what you know |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow what a fine write for my morning! I love the style of you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Thank you so much for your wonderful answer. serenity To be better you would have to be an angel. Not that you don't have some of their qualities but I really like you as you are.  passing Thank you for the WOW you are a dear. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is beautiful, Sy. BTW, I have some painting that needs done around the ole home place  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Lots of luck with a sensitive painter. LOL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is a gem Seymour and I am keepin' it! Into my library it floats. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Sy! I would stay and chat but I have a nasty cold. I'm off to curl up with a hot cup of tea.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, I am honored to be in your library. Have a Happy New Year. Nancy, Thank you and enjoy your tea. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your instructions are clear and lovely Sir Sy thank you |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Live with it a one on one Stay with it till you are done Then take a brush in faint and Paint and paint and paint and paint Till you see its spirits goal It’s than you’ve painted its soul ~HOWA~ Symore Tabin a prayer in a painting lesson,and so two meaningful lessons for life in one.Be it picture or word your heart paints in true beauty! Sigi!
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you sweety glad you enjoyed and Happy New Year. wredgranny, Happy New Year and thank you for the lovely comment. |
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