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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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does it bother you enough to look the other way occasionally when you slip on a poem that was left behind accidently of course since it would not be proper otherwise to suggest such things as we have our special obligations but I do wonder about your eyes how they look away quickly occupied perhaps with the windows that look back to see if I noticed your reaction and if I am not pretending obviously to be interested in saying more perhaps just a few words in a poem that was left behind ________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
obviously, a  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Dark... it doesn't bother me, though sometimes those windows can get a little fogged .. enjoyed this write of yours as always... oh and I don't think I need it deciphering this time  RDB |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
quite obviously, this is, as are you....a smile maker. Hugs bigdaddyDaark. .....  ~D~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you for tucking this into your soft warm memory book ______________ ms b, oh please let me tell you my intentions (with the poem that is) grin ______________ ms gs, thank you for letting me play in your girl thoughts |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I love the structure of this one. You use it to underscore and make the poem move like a dance. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan. thanks so much for your review |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' it does bother me to slip on a poem that was left behind bothers me good as do all your poems |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, so pleased to see you bothered babe, thank you |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Some poems are loaded with "a peel". This is blantant invasion. The question is, who's invading who? I know, a shadow never disclothes his strategy... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
if I noticed your reaction and if I am not pretending obviously to be interested in saying more perhaps just a few words in a poem that was left behind Siyo Dark Stranger there are many times the words do not seem just right for the moment,but written they must be they will no leave alone your mind. And then one day as if in light those very words are perfect!
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, you peel my mind with your comments, thanks babe ______________ ms wrege, humble thanks to your review |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perhaps just a few words it's all i'm good for these days it seems |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms dixie..I am sure there are thousands of words you would wear well, thanks for the eyes here |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
woo'ing the ladies again, i see, Dark Stranger... A very fine write indeed... In my thoughts, deep sighingly-eee ~Moonkist Freedom Now |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Makes me wonder who is reading the poems I left behind me...o by the way....Happy New Year......  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
if a poem was left behind, it was obviously left to strew diamonds on a road of stone and therefore deserves to be tripped on and re-discovered. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
always love this side of you~~ once again I enjoyed~~ M |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Maybe poems are never really left behind? Maybe they are just saved in our hearts and souls for the right time to express how they make us feel? So good to read your writing again. a |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes, DS...you just write to my heart.  |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
I look for your words often. But this "if I noticed your reaction and if I am not pretending obviously to be interested in saying more perhaps just a few words in a poem that was left behind" Says all that I would wish to. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks to each of you for the read and touch..I am blessed humble.. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Dark, Hello!... just came back to read this one of yours ... especially nice! But where are your other ones since I have beem absent sunning myself on the beach?? Happy New Year RDB |
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