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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Affaire It was a bright, hungry day in a parking lot of any city; groceries and the wind, a paper blowing within her mind like time across the asphalt of morning, spoke. There could be no dowdy on her pale skin, a-shiver as the paper stilled for her, even as her long multi-colored skirt, like an anxious kite tethered to her rounded hips reacted to the air and lifted shadows from off the crowded ground. Pick me up, then fold and crease to pocket’s precious understanding; like shells, feathers and rocks, she heard the sky affirm, fill this empty space with words. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Martie Your a word wizard for sure, and loving the words you write....precious and profound |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pick me up, then fold and crease to pocket’s precious understanding; like shells, feathers and rocks, she heard the sky affirm, fill this empty space with words. ~*~ Oh, that whitest sheet, forlorn of words just waiting for your ink's blessings...  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Pick me up, then fold and crease to pocket’s precious understanding;" amazing how you use words Martie lovely, this one... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you fill these blue pages with such beauty.....Happy Holidays |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
reacted to the air and lifted shadows from off the crowded ground. Sigi sister for showing the eye of mind,pictures that speak so loudly!
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful mind you have, dear Marti!! Such pretty words you do write Hugs, Ethel Ethel's Creations...MySpace My new poetry website Ethel's Creations...poetry, etc. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Marti... this is lovely! RDB Happy New Year to you too x |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful sweet Martie!! Sing in me muse... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
fill this empty space with words. And you answer beautifully. *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
--smiling you....I can just see you doing that, so very Martie a thing to do. Tell ya what, I'll loan you my pencil..... /main/forumdisplay.cgi?action=displayarchive&number=81&topic=002302 ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
a paper blowing within her mind How well put! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you for listening, dear Martie, and for filling up our lives with your words. May the new year bring you much happiness. Luv Helen |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely writing, Martie~~ Wishing you a healthy and happy New Year. M |
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