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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-12-27 07:10 AM



the spin of slippery spit
she is an avon in her evening
jutting the secret itches
bold to the preacher man's eyes

old iron has missed the sins
that writhe black bones to eden
wrong side of silly in street cloth
zippery confusion to the music

the drinker carrys his gold now
one handed in the hurry turn
smokin soot for the watchery
that chirp their high-five ooowies

then follow in mind box obedience
to see if the leather screams when burned
or just slides the sides of curbs
to the off side of unknown travel

voiceless as splendor in the gravel
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daark

scribblenote: avon is a motorcycle tire..smokin soot is a burn where the rider revs and drops the clutch...etc



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-27 07:13 AM


ah Mr Dark... I think a gal would have to hold on very tight for a ride with you! RDB
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-12-27 07:18 AM


ms b..yes it would be wise..but then again it could be enjoyable too, thanks ms
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-12-27 07:46 AM


Saddlin up, am ready to ride.  Niiicee D..
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-12-27 09:27 AM


thanks ms gs,
Martie
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5 posted 2006-12-27 10:55 AM


DS....Merry ride to you....better take your umbrella.  
The Lady
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6 posted 2006-12-27 12:00 PM



Stranger darlin'
smokin soot sounds good to me today
even road rash sounds good

nice words

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2006-12-27 01:59 PM


ms martie, thanks lil neighbor, you make me smile.

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ladyone, feel the wind today, it will be wicked whispering to sooth you..thanks babe

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8 posted 2006-12-27 04:10 PM


still waiting for my ride   always a pleasure to read you

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-12-27 05:12 PM


ms g, thanks for the read ms
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