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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-12-26 04:31 PM



could


he writes me
love letters
day numbered
so I won’t forget
of his
constant thought
like I really
could


“all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell



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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
1 posted 2006-12-26 07:26 PM



Helen,


Boy, you really leave yourself open.
You wear a Bull's eye on your sleeve.

John

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2 posted 2006-12-26 10:29 PM



like you really could indeed Helen

amazing poem


miscellanea
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3 posted 2006-12-26 10:45 PM


Very neat poem!  It's good to read your writing again.  

miscellanea

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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-12-27 11:16 AM


Hold on tight!
Sounds like a lovely ride

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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