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TheUnlabelled
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since 2006-12-25
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0 posted 2006-12-25 04:15 AM


Screaming at the top of your lungs
no one hears?
yelling as loud as you can
no one hears?

i sit in my room
surrounded by nothing but emptiness it seems
with only my thoughts to distract me
the whispers of past events

i re-think events of the day
thinking of what i could've done
what i did wrong
what i didn't do

their voices echo in my head
whispering insults
screaming
screaming softly

i try to block them out
i try not to remember
but the whispers are getting louder
i'm screaming but no one can hear me



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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.
1 posted 2006-12-25 01:17 PM



   Sometimes a whisper seems more powerful than a raging storm.....

     Nice emotional write... pray continue to post.

           MoonShadow

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