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Eli
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since 2006-12-23
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0 posted 2006-12-24 04:35 AM



"The lost love"

Im in a ball on the ground
The darkness coming in all around me
I wonder was what i did right
Was it good.

The pain the anguish of it all
I lost it all, all in one day
I feel tears rolling down my red cheaks.

I still sit here and think what could have been
What we could have shared
But i will never know
Why? because i looked
I saw the grass was greener on the other side
Untill i got there it was grey and dead like my inside.

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-12-24 09:37 AM


sad, but very nicely written


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