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Open Poetry #39

Hard Times

Eli
Junior Member

since 2006-12-23

Posts 10

0 posted 2006-12-23 08:35 AM

This is my first time here and my first go at poetry so if its not that good im sorry

He was only little,
He didn't know what was happening
His brother looking down at him
His heart beating hands clasped
There was no where to go.

As he sat there,
Looking, thinking why me
why now, what have i done.

As the brother leaves,
He looks back and keeps walking
I sit there motinoless,
Tears sweling in my eyes.

It was a time in my life that hurt and still hurts to this day.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-12-23 08:48 AM

Welcome to Passions!
I am sure you will enjoy it here.
Have a look around at all the forums we offer.
AND, Happy Holidays to you!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-12-23 09:11 AM

Welcome to PIP...your going to love these blue pages and the community that circles around you...

wishing you a great holiday season...grow from the memories...be who you are...and love love love until the cows come home...

God bless

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2006-12-23 10:33 AM

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-12-23 07:11 PM

Welcome to Passions. You've the beginning
of a heart-wrenching story, I'm sure, in
this poetic sharing.

Please, check your email for a
Very Special Greeting!

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