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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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I think … you could be good for my heart I think… you could be good for my soul I think…you could be just what I need I think…you could be just to my liking I think… I’m going to enjoy the moments Because I think I want to... [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (12-22-2006 03:27 AM).] |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
ahh so true. when a heart finds someone and wants to be with them that's usually how the thought process goes. The last line says it all "Because I want to" I think RDB that you write nice. Since I have been here I havent read anything from you that seemed forced, just to the point and not leaving the reader saying huh? I want to leave a comment, but how do I respond. I think you get my point. Have a Merry Christmas and "be well" <-- I love that !*smiles* ohh and Happy New Year. Will be back posting after the first going to England for Christmas and leaving the laptop at home (: good for my heart good for my soul just what I need just to my liking enjoy the moments Because I want to... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah my sweet Bill... you are so nice to me - thank you for your comments, yes everything I write is not forced just straight from my heart, straight from my soul I guess... Have a wonderful time in England... it will be cold though yes??? bbbbrrrrrr I say!! Be well love Roniece xx |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
certainly sounds mutual to me... sweet message and submission |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
LeeJ.... thank you so much for your comment.. merry christmas to you  RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like this poem very much  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms b, a lady that wants to just want to..there is nothing so lovely..enjoyed you here ms |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... thank you for stopping by! RDB Mr Dark.... the want is strong RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh Roniece if you think you want to then by all means do... I love this! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Well thought RDB Rich |
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