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The offering

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spiked4
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0 posted 12-21-2006 09:05 AM       View Profile for spiked4   Email spiked4   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked4

The flicker of the candlelight
Shadows cast this rainy night
with heavy heart we wait our time
and draw your bath in to find
a place where i have yet to touch
subtleness not very much
a gesture of a love in mend
or simply playing out its end
an aromatic sense in blend
with hope and amid confusion
quietly i walk you still
into this room which candles fill
and help you in this sauna made
to take your stress away
now lying in a facial mask
a gentle wash no hidden task
i clense your mind for this one night
only offer some delight
no sex nothing beyond what you see
just pleasant time for us to be
a little more in tune with one
a memory to share
in latter time remember this
as just some pure romantic bliss
and carry it instead of pain
a memory to help contain
the bitterness of love.

[This message has been edited by spiked4 (12-22-2006 04:08 AM).]

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1 posted 12-21-2006 09:22 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

sounds like a wonderful time
spiked4
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Thank you passing shadows
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3 posted 08-30-2007 01:46 AM       View Profile for navybound   Email navybound   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for navybound

Hey dad. beautiful work. they wouldnt let me read these if i didnt join so......

I Love You,
Joshua Rendall
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4 posted 08-30-2007 11:21 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Joshua~
Welcome !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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5 posted 04-10-2008 12:46 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you all so much and Josh never thought you read my stuff truely a nice find.
 
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