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You Alone
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You Alone |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA 
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You alone...‘Twas always you, Who shaped my vision splendid. And took my very breath away, By beauty… never ended. If Helena launched a thousand ships, And ruled a dynasty. Then a thousand times I’ve kissed your lips, And tasted ecstasy. It was you... ‘Twas always you, With your love so pure… and yet. ‘Twas a love not meant to last, Our sun at last had set. I lived awhile and loved awhile, In a world that gave me you. My loss shall not diminish, The love that once we knew. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know about those loves that aren't meant to last good piece |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Sometimes people in general fall and love, and know from the start it wont last. Happened to me. I tried so hard she said i was too perfect *lol* thanks for the read as always passingshadow |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
trueto, nice work guy..enjoyed your art |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Thanks for stopping bye and taking a peek Dark. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Lovely my sweet Bill! RDB |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
If Helena launched a thousand ships, And ruled a dynasty. Then a thousand times I’ve kissed your lips, And tasted ecstasy. whew...gave me chills this one... your definately in love kiddo.... well written and romantically insightful |
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