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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-12-21 07:42 AM


I See and See

My eyes that look and see and see
Depending on the thought that be
I see your hair, your length and bear
And with my inner eye your fair

Most will see you common birth
To me you are uncommon earth
While most will see a common bear
I will see an angel there

You walk this world as one in sight
To me this sight is sheer delight
Each time I look upon your face
My mind will skip a beat in place

I orb about your essence bower
Like a bee about a flower
My thoughts go into weightlessness
And all of this I do confess

You are my grail or Angel’s dup
You are the wine that fills my cup



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-21 07:49 AM


I see Sir Sy, I see... loved this write of yours  - RDB
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-12-21 08:04 AM


Roniece,
Yout read and comment are a joy.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-12-21 08:04 AM


its amazing, how love looks far past and sees beauty in the flaws....tremendous happy tune this morning Sy
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-12-21 08:07 AM


LeeJ
And the top of the morning to you too my dear.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-12-21 09:25 AM


may your cup always runneth over

beautiful write for this morning

trutodaraiders
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6 posted 2006-12-21 09:45 AM


Striking words. Thanks for sharing this poem. Nicely done sir
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7 posted 2006-12-21 09:50 AM


BRAVO!
Well done, Sy

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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8 posted 2006-12-21 10:47 AM


Lucky is the one who's seen through such loving eyes. *S* Beautiful write!!!

Much love to you and Isabel... I hope your holidays are wonderful! *S*

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9 posted 2006-12-21 11:06 AM


Seymour~
You are word-beautiful~
(and those legs are hunky-dory too)

Merry Christmas from my heart to yours~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2006-12-21 11:24 AM


passing,
And may your cup be filled to the brim.


trutodaraiders,
That is always nice to read, thank you.

Interloper
You are always encouraging, thank you.

suthern,
Missed you, hope you had a nice holiday.


Marge,
You are a love.

The Lady
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11 posted 2006-12-21 02:09 PM




"I will see an angel there"

ah Sir Sy
we see with the eyes we are given
and yours are pure love


Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2006-12-21 03:01 PM


Lady,
You are so kind.

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2006-12-21 09:10 PM


Mr. T., all the beauty that you behold is your own beauty being reflected back to you, for your inner beauty radiates without.

Loving hug,

EA

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2006-12-21 10:48 PM


Earth Angel
Thank you sweet and I hope you had a wonderful Holiday.

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