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twinkyfl1
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0 posted 2006-12-20 01:34 PM


This pain in my heart's like a razor
'Causing my heart to bleed
The tears in my eyes are like raindrops
Falling on all your misdeeds.

You tell me you love me, then hurt me
When I need you, you always desert me
You call it love and I call it pain
Why stay around when there's nothing to gain
I want so to go, but still I remain..loving you.

I pray every night that He'll free me
From this hell where no one can see me
So lost in your world and feeling so numb
Not liking this person I've slowly become.

A person who's split in so many parts
Picking up pieces of my broken heart.
Living on memories of our distant past
Wondering why we just can't seem to last.

How long can I keep holding on
Feeling the pain from twilight to dawn
This torment that my soul goes through
From loving you...From loving you.


© Copyright 2006 junemarie roldan - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2006-12-20 01:42 PM


I think you are in need of a great big hug of love and a show of appreciation. One who is capable of such love is deserving of having it returned. A very moving read. Never lose sight of your own precious, 'twink'ling self.

Loving Light ~ and a healing hug,

EA

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2006-12-20 01:58 PM


This was a nice poem though sad it might be your did a nice job penning your fellings down. Anyone that has been heartbroken, and has the desire to be loved can relate. ~Bill
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-12-20 03:19 PM


time to stop the pain
love is meant to bring great joy
happiness the goal

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

twinkyfl1
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4 posted 2006-12-20 03:41 PM


Earth Angel, I feel loved and wanted in the warmth of your hug.

Thank you for that and your comment.


twinkyfl1
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5 posted 2006-12-20 03:44 PM


trutodaraiders,

Thank you for your kind words, they are appreciated.

twinkyfl1
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6 posted 2006-12-20 03:51 PM


Interloper, Thanks for your well intentioned words. Unfortunately, pain doesn't come with a timetable.

Merry Christmas.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-12-21 02:16 AM


I can relate to this

and I don't think it's worth it to love someone who brings pain

but I know, it's not like a switch you can just turn off

ethome
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8 posted 2006-12-21 02:45 AM


Sad but very well expressed

Eric

twinkyfl1
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9 posted 2006-12-21 04:26 AM


Thanks Dixie,

What about 'Clap On'? That's not a switch. See, I can still laugh.

twinkyfl1
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10 posted 2006-12-21 04:27 AM


Thanks ethome, you're a good person.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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11 posted 2006-12-21 04:36 AM


June.... I'm sending you a "HUG" xx RDB
twinkyfl1
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12 posted 2006-12-21 05:06 AM


Roniece, Thanks. Got it.
The Lady
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13 posted 2006-12-21 01:15 PM




ahhhhh June
such great pain

hugs and more hugs


Draugluin
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14 posted 2006-12-21 01:49 PM


It's odd how the best things in life can also be the most painful, very emotional poem, good work.
twinkyfl1
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15 posted 2006-12-21 02:56 PM


Lady thanks, I'll take all the hugs I can get.
twinkyfl1
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16 posted 2006-12-21 02:57 PM


Wise observation. Thank you Draugluin.
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