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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-12-20 01:00 PM



Do You Read My Mind

Within written expression
What do we portray
Are my words translated
Do emotions convey

In spilling heart's contents
While emotions paint
Revealed in written verse
Do feelings correlate

Could you read emotions
Without seeing eyes
What feelings were seen
Do words rationalise

Blending a written collage
Many traits combined
How well do you know me
Do you read my mind


HopeĀ©2006

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2006-12-20 01:08 PM


Very interesting write, and much enjoyed.
Merry Christmas to you dear lady.
hugs, Chris

Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-12-20 01:09 PM


A most excellent write as always Hope!
Hugs~Nancy

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

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3 posted 2006-12-20 03:14 PM


Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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