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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2006-12-20 12:41 PM


He squashed a bug with His big toe
because it had no place to go--
the power of it made Him laugh:
"That..is that." And aftermath
attracted ants, who didn't know
that God was watching them.

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1 posted 2006-12-20 02:07 PM


grin--I kinda knew this one wouldn't fly at christmas time.

I'm not a reindeer though--I just look like one when caught in headlights!

No offense intended folks--just a different perspective here.

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2 posted 2006-12-20 02:44 PM


On reading your comment, I kinda love your self-effacing honesty and humour. It's very charming!

~ and watch out for God's Toe, it's a BIG one! lol

Blessings to you, Serene One!

Linda

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3 posted 2006-12-20 03:32 PM


From your write I can't tell if He squashed a bug with His big toe or just someone squashed a bug with his big toe .... so, what's the point of contention?

I like the way you cause us to think and I have always liked the way you write  


Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2006-12-20 03:41 PM


serenity
You put it well.

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5 posted 2006-12-20 03:44 PM


I clarified the pronoun--the rest?

Entirely up to you--

thanks for humoring my ill humor today.


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6 posted 2006-12-20 10:35 PM


flies with me serenity
Christmas or no

and it ain't just about toes or bugs either
like it


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7 posted 2006-12-21 12:07 PM


Nor could their numbers know
that god was among them,
aftermath or not.

(oh, i should not reply at this hour . . .)

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8 posted 2006-12-21 01:45 AM


ouch! I try to stay out from under said toe
Hey, happy solstice sis!

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9 posted 2006-12-21 01:50 AM


I read this earlier but wasn't sure how to comment

you know I adore ya

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10 posted 2006-12-21 01:52 AM


Well Serene One,
You may not fly at Christmas but you certainly swim upstream! But ohterwise how could you... uh, oh never mind. And just for the record God's big enough to take care of himself. And your bad mood may scare me but it doesn't scare him. But either way we both still love you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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11 posted 2006-12-21 10:29 PM


Ah..it wasn't all just bad mood, I had also been contemplating an exchange in one of my favorite movies, The Mothman Prophecies.

It's one of my favorite analogies on the futility of trying to define the nature of God, and I quote it alot, so if you have heard me quote it before, well, you're going to read me quoting it again:

"John Klein: I think we can assume that these entities are more advanced than us. Why don't they just come right out and tell us what's on their minds?

Alexander Leek: You're more advanced than a cockroach, have you ever tried explaining yourself to one of them?
"

so you see, the poem was not intended to insult anyone's perception of God--it was just a further exploration of the statement made by the character of Alexander Leek, which was prompted, I confess, by Huan Yi's recent queries in Philosophy on the nature of God.

I do regret the timing of the post though.

I didn't deliberately intend to disrespect anyone's observance of thier Holiday.

Peace to all. Happy Solstice and yes,

Merry Christmas! Thank you for reading.




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