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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-12-20 08:17 AM


Still Knocking

I knocked a dreamer’s door last night
To open up and show the light
To see the making of the dawn
And dew drops of the early morn

I would to learn the magic spell
This duo place in which I dwell
To join the spirit of the wield
To know the powers flowers field

To shed this cloak of many churn
And live a simple flowers turn
To face the early and the late
To bend my head and face my fate

Confusion is a state of awe
That makes you knock on every door
Although the fifer plays a waltz
It really is chameleon false

One day I’ll knock a silent door
And stay in silence evermore


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-20 08:21 AM


Keep Knocking Sir Sy - your words were a knockout! enjoyed  RDB
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-12-20 08:53 AM


Roniece,
You are kind, thank you.

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3 posted 2006-12-20 08:54 AM


Morning Sy!
You aren't going knocking on any silent doors for a long time to come!
Take care and have a great day!

    
~May Peace be your gift at Christmas and your blessing all year through~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-12-20 09:32 AM


Nancy,
LOL from your mouth to Gods ear.

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5 posted 2006-12-20 09:56 AM


Words of wonder once again Seymour.
hugs to you, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

passing shadows
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6 posted 2006-12-20 10:43 AM


I agree with Nancy here
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2006-12-20 11:01 AM


Chris
You are a doll, thank you sweety.

passing  
Appreciate your thinking

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8 posted 2006-12-20 11:18 AM


You Sir did a nice job with your words this morning
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-12-20 01:19 PM


trutodaraiders
Thank you so much.

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10 posted 2006-12-20 03:08 PM


Whoa!
gr8 write, Sy

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-12-20 03:33 PM


Interloper
Appreciate your comment thank you.

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12 posted 2006-12-20 10:21 PM




just keep waltzin' Sir Sy
you waltz so well...


Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2006-12-20 10:24 PM


Lady
LOL Thats what I've been trying to do.

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