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Winter Landscape |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. A last red tint At dusk Is about to leave The Western sky Trees that line the hills Though which a path passes Are darkly leafless And coated with snow Mother thinks Papa Has gone to Poland Yet is bound To be back soon How good it would be To go in a dream Regardless of realities Then and now . [This message has been edited by Huan Yi (12-19-2006 05:26 PM).] |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't understand how this could have slipped by unremarked, my friend. It's beautiful, though-provoking, full of feeling, and leaves one thinking. jwesley |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
jwesley, Thank you. I suggest then you look at “Genesis” which I posted a couple of days ago and went onto a previous page unnoticed. Thanks again. John |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh I agree!! this is fabulous writing here John... well done! RDB |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
life. |
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