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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I often look at the skin of trees at the edge of our eden place the one we built separately alone together some other monday we were children minds dancing playing hand in hand in sand helpless we were bound to love loveing to be bound helpless and then our bodies knew fear the what if of not knowing the other better than ourselves so we traded our skins and saliva it was never routine but often like it had to happen more like the skin of trees we needed more than we could ever want to and wanted more than we could ever need _______________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Pretty, pretty skin.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks for the E-tree views and the read |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I like your style of writing Dark. Did a nice job here in your description |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
truto' thank you for the review |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Mr Dark... wonderful! RDB x |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
D, enjoyed this especially: helpless we were bound to love loveing to be bound helpless  M |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
nicely written my friend...really like the "newness" in the wording. jwesley |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger Darlin' nothing is ever routine with you 'specially your words |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"I often look at the skin of trees at the edge of our eden place the one we built separately alone together some other monday and then our bodies knew fear like the skin of trees we needed more than we could ever want to and wanted more than we could ever need" I can read you and feel the "ever." beautiful D. love, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms B, thanks for the wave with your smile hands _____________ ms MMs thank you babe for reading and wearing __________ jWesley thanks amigo for the eyes _________ ladyone, play the music I will come be a tree for your mind thank you ladyone ___________ msrwood, behind the walls there waits the forest where nothing moves faster than slow easy want to..meet me there and wear your love shoes? thanks babe [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-20-2006 07:38 AM).] |
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