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Open Poetry #39

The flicker of lightning

spiked4
Junior Member

since 2006-12-07

Posts 35
Hammond, La

0 posted 2006-12-19 06:34 AM

The flicker of lightning
I see inside my head
The glowing of the sparks
Are what I see instead
Of the vision set before me
You cross my path of sight
Your movement I now follow
My thoughts on you tonight
So stunning and so graceful
You glide across the floor
The tattering of footstep
You have me wanting more
Once you were a part of me
And now a distant dream
But my love doesn’t sizzle
It’s much more like a steam
The fires of desire
They burn so deep inside
You are the one I’ve needed
To polish on my pride
Make me feel I’m worth it
This crooked path we take
The roles that we now carry
Are left from what we make.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-12-19 07:22 AM

I love the flow, the rhyming of this!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2006-12-19 08:10 PM

And lightning strikes twice more often than people might think...

this is beautiful Rich.

Your muse is inspiring.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2006-12-19 08:13 PM

Richard... I like the flow to this... RDB

spiked4
Junior Member

since 2006-12-07

Posts 35
Hammond, La

4 posted 2006-12-19 11:57 PM

thanks finding it easier to get going now. didn't realize how much i missed writing although sometimes inspiration can be painful
nice to be read

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