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themute
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0 posted 2006-12-18 03:07 PM



Phoenix Child

Give yourself a thought or thrice,
For the life you had was paradise:
Your youth, whence lies were but notions sin,
And sin was but a notions din.
Be not the years you’d lived before,
Stead be ye whose heart is bore
Of the day and the night whence dreams are forged.
Be the phoenix from such ashen, gorged.
I say: live thy life, yet be not your child-self adorned,
For thy life’s color may be scarlet beauty, scorned.
Entangled so, let thoughts untwine
Thy memories of pain and pine.
For love will come on the whispering mire
Whose call is lost to the listening liar.

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-12-18 04:37 PM


good grief! How old are you?

wow!

DreamerSpirit
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2 posted 2006-12-18 04:50 PM


Just excellent...i really liked this one..made me think a lot!

Good Work!

Denis.

themute
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3 posted 2006-12-18 08:10 PM


I turned 18 in november, but really, who knows.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-18 09:56 PM


Matthew... stunning write!!  such wisdom in your words...  RDB
passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-12-18 11:42 PM


amazing! You write like a college graduate! Keep up the great work!
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