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Phantoms of my Sighs

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Seymour Tabin
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Rewrite


Phantoms of My Sighs

I sleep within a flow of sighs
Feathered pillows and echo cries
The night has sent a host of ghosts
Phantoms that will roast the most

They oft into my sleeping mind
Some are soft and some unkind
All will offer pantomime
Each a field of separate time

Theyíre echoes of my day of real
With changes of my stays appeal
Itís roman orgy or a fear
But never ever very clear

I wallow in a field of seem
Or hide within a shadows dream
But ever busy sounding sighs
For some of them are outright lies

These dreams are robes of nightly dress
And Iím the king of acquiesce
© Copyright 2006 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-18-2006 08:53 AM       View Profile for twinkyfl1   Email twinkyfl1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twinkyfl1

Sy, this was wonderful.

As Alice Cooper said "Welcome to my nightmare."
LeeJ
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I wallow in a field of seem
Or hide within a shadows dream
But ever busy sounding sighs
For some of them are outright lies

(sighs)
extraordinary this...enjoyed
Seymour Tabin
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twinkyfl1
Enjoyed the comment, thak you.

LeeJ
Thank you sweety and the top of the morning to yee.
Triskaidekaphobia
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4 posted 12-18-2006 09:42 AM       View Profile for Triskaidekaphobia   Email Triskaidekaphobia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Triskaidekaphobia

I really liked this Seymour... I couldn't tell you why exactly I just did.  lol

"The world won't end in darkness, it'll end in family fun
With Coca Cola clouds behind a Big Mac sun."

One God by The Beautiful South

Seymour Tabin
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Triskaidekaphobia
Love your honesty, thank you.
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Loved this Sy...you are truly a wordsmith and a painter of words.

Bea
Seymour Tabin
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Beatrice,
Painted in oils for many years. I just changed my medium and now use words. Thank you for the kind comment.
The Lady
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dear king of acquiesce

I am in love with this one...

Seymour Tabin
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Lady
I'll bet you make wonderful cookies and cakes.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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love this one Sir Sy
RDB
Seymour Tabin
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Roniece,
Glad you enjoyed and thank you for the comment.
jwesley
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And a good king you make my friend...enjoyed this.

jwesley
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jwesley
Thank you my friend.
Earth Angel
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King Sigh, this maiden wouldst be honoured to touch thy robe.

Lay thy regal head gently upon feathered pillows and dream sweetly.

Sleep tight this nite!

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA
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Earth Angel
You are a delight Angel or not.
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I be part angel and part nymph.

Have a glorious day, Sir Sonneteer!


EA
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Earth Angel
I suspected as much. LOL
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Ah my friend...
I remember you well.

Sending up kisses, Sy.

 
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