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A Brief Moment .....
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A Brief Moment ..... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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For such a brief moment It was hot It was exciting It was lustful Your world and mine collided So instantly So beautifully So remarkably And your words and your touch Is what I craved Is what I needed Is what I got Thank you for being there when I needed someone like you… |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice to have someone like that..even if only for a brief moment M |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Here, hear, let's drink to brief moments! GREAT WRITE |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you for your comments, I value them greatly x RDB x |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A moment of human touch can be timeless. Nice write! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Icebox... thank you and I agree with your sentiments... human touch is vital to one's well being  RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a moment to be remembered a lifetime |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... thank you darling girl RDB x |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Your world and mine collided" What a wonderful way to describe a passionate 'togetherness'. I do so enjoy reading your works, RDB... They do provoke much thought and feeling, Milady. MoonShadow |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Currently has a bag of ice on his lap; yep this poem stirred a few erotic memories. Nicely done~Bill |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
MoonShadow....thank you for your kind words - much appreciated my friend - RDB x Bill .... LOL you are so cute! RDB James.... thank you my friend RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
brief moments are so nice Roniece and a lot of them can make a whole day... |
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