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Open Poetry #39

I Just Cant Fit (Repost)

trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2006-12-18 01:43 AM

My despair is never ending,
Only silence do I hear,
friends to me are lost,
Amid my silence and my tears.
For the sunrise is always hidden,
The sunset... never seen,
And hope is far removed,
From the joy which could have been.
Now hope is quickly falling,
Into a never ending pit,
And though I try to carry on,
To life... I just can’t fit.
For I locked away your beauty,
Then I threw away the key,
I tried so hard to forget you,
But you haunt and stir... in me.
Will there ever be a sunrise,
Will there be a brand new morn,
Will I ever see the beauty,
In the sun at break of dawn?
No! I don’t want to see such beauty,
For despair has stole my heart,
deep down I truly know,
That we’ll always be apart.
When your heart no more recalls me,
When at last I face my death,
Know... that when I left thee,
Your name was upon my breath.
For I whispered your name too often,
And clung to thoughts of you,
When I should have bid farewell,
When I should have said, ”Adieu”.
You were everything to me,
My today and my tomorrows,
Now all I’ve known is gone,
Replaced by sadness and with sorrows.
Though others... I may love,
For they’ll cast their magic spell,
No one will feel the depth of love,
That I felt for you... Danielle.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-18 03:21 AM

oh my Bill.... this is an excellent write! Danielle is loved by you very much I see...

RDB

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-12-18 07:59 AM

to love once...it's all we can ask

twinkyfl1
Member

since 2006-12-15

Posts 133
florida

3 posted 2006-12-18 09:10 AM

In this poem, you have expressed every women's dream.

To be loved as no other.

I love the subjects you address in your poetry, and look forward to reading more of your work.

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