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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2006-12-18 01:33 AM



Just as a withered love will die,
Every love will surely part,
Not with the grace of times gone by,
But with the ceasing of the heart.

I only wished an eternal love,
For eternity… took haste,
Every love - we will forever love,
Rapidly passes and comes to waste.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



© Copyright 2006 Bill Franklin - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-18 03:25 AM


love can last forever my sweet Bill enjoyed  RDB
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-12-18 08:03 AM


I know the feeling Bill
twinkyfl1
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florida
3 posted 2006-12-18 09:04 AM


This made my heart ache.


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