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Magnus
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0 posted 2006-12-17 11:37 AM


A whisper,
Silent as a sail’s billow,
Invisibly powerful…
Lightly lingering.

Cast into four winds,  whirling,
Swirling,  twirling the vane,
Calling as an echo of seasons
Falling quietly to earth as a
Leaf spirals downward and a
Tear runs in silent rivulet.

A whisper…blown elegantly
Across a chandelier…as a
Shadow chases the wandering
Moon before dawn’s light.

Sealed with a lingering kiss,
shared by wondering eyes...



© Copyright 2006 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Honeybunch
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1 posted 2006-12-17 11:49 AM


Such meaning you give to a whisper.  Lovely!
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-12-17 04:28 PM



Oh Barry! How lovely, your whisper.


Draugluin
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3 posted 2006-12-17 05:35 PM


Now, that is a whisper i'd want in on! good one.
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4 posted 2006-12-17 06:19 PM


Beautiful my friend.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2006-12-17 06:31 PM


beautifully penned... Merry Christmas to you   RDB
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6 posted 2006-12-17 09:16 PM


whew! how softly this touches!
Sunshine
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7 posted 2006-12-17 10:04 PM



The past rings well
within a breath
and a whisper


Startime55
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8 posted 2006-12-19 03:32 PM


OH...OH...OH...you sure haven't lost your touch...Your poems still blaze with visions of love and softness....sooooo wonderful to read your words again, my friend...**BIG HUGS**

Pilgrimage
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9 posted 2006-12-19 04:07 PM


How lovely.  Quiet and delicate.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

jwesley
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10 posted 2006-12-19 07:45 PM


Soft and wonderful, my friend...let's hear it for more and frequent whispers...

jimmy

Patricia
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11 posted 2006-12-20 07:05 AM


So soft your whisper captured by your lovely images.

Beautiful.

Patricia

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12 posted 2006-12-20 09:50 AM


You whisper mots so sweetly, Sir Poet...

Be still my heart... Sighing, here...

~ Gosh, Barry! Yer gooood!

Love and Christmas Light,

Linda

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