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Love=God |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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Dear god, I will change for you. Dear god, I will write you letters. Dear god, I will love you. Dear god let me know if you love me too, I can’t feel your love anymore. I have asked myself: Where does this frequency end? But you know that it ends in the dark; When all the candles are unlit, When all the stars have closed their eyes, And the moon has left us alone. We will be together there, all alone. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Wow, I've never really seen someone your age write something like that. I mean I'm 18, you gotta be that or at least a year younger maybe. This is a very mature way of thinking. Cheers - Ed And I said to the devil, "You better leave my spleen alone." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very mature indeed you'll go far in life |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Matthew... this is an amazing write... RDB |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
what maturity is, is what time cannot measure. much like who a man is, is what a name cannot determine. much like how god is what cannot be named or understood for any one second; the only way we can come close to god is through love, --true love--that and the understanding of truth, but that too can only be for a single moment, like the stirring wind: never solid, mortal as the river; yet in so being, imortaly briliant. I am the two-toed wanderer [This message has been edited by themute (12-17-2006 09:39 PM).] |
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