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Draugluin
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0 posted 2006-12-16 11:22 PM


“Reaction in L”

Let your soul free it seeks a new dawn
Likewise we found in each other a moon beam
Leave the watchers to worship the watchers
Love is the substance that dwindles with time
Listen to the beat that brings us together
Life is the substance that ripens the wine
Lie down now, or stand forever
Learn from me, you want to be wanted
Lust now before your moment is gone
Lingering madly, a body so haunted
Lay your body down it seeks a new dawn.



[This message has been edited by Draugluin (12-17-2006 01:04 AM).]

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twinkyfl1
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florida
1 posted 2006-12-16 11:30 PM


This is deep and very beautiful.

To thy own self be true

Draugluin
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2 posted 2006-12-16 11:54 PM


thanks

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-12-17 02:13 AM


awesome!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-17 02:15 AM


I liked the use of the 'L' words here - very nicely done - enjoyed !  RDB
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