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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2006-12-16 11:28 AM


When two hearts beat together,
the melody sounds so sweet.
No greater tune can ever be heard,
than when two loving hearts meet.

Every note, strung together,
comes from both heart's devotion.
Creating a musical masterpiece,
filled with so much deep emotion.

A love tune without an ending,
as new notes are continually played.
A beautiful melody from hearts in love,
which together, have tenderly made

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-12-16 11:50 AM


precious!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-12-16 12:27 PM



Excellent!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2006-12-16 06:01 PM


Nice writing...James
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-17 12:17 PM


A love tune without an ending,
as new notes are continually played.
A beautiful melody from hearts in love,
which together, have tenderly made

nice writing here Bill   RDB

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