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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest

0 posted 2006-12-15 11:24 PM





random dots
pressed to paper
form a pattern
against their will

it began irregular  
came together
yes
there is order even in madness
it can be fit together in a way
that is pleasing

love opens time and space
differently
from measurable time and space

I find myself wrapped in a blanket of
anyseem
tiny holes thread with gold

fingers
swimming among themselves
eyes
tracking copper moon

beyond the far shore  
tried in the flame of desire    
I wake in your dream
warm myself  
by the fire of your face

a face of

random dots
pressed to paper


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-12-16 12:02 PM


a beautiful madness it is!
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-12-16 12:08 PM



thank you so much Dixie!


Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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3 posted 2006-12-16 07:50 AM


ladyone I enjoy you mad...and this too
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2006-12-16 03:07 PM


"random dots
pressed to paper
form a pattern
against their will"...

Each, a stolen moment, reproduced before fate.

Inspiring opener here, dear Lady!

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-12-17 12:08 PM



Stranger darlin’
I go mad quite often  
glad you like it  
and this too

thank you so much TD


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2006-12-17 12:56 PM


ah you gotta love those random dots!  a very nice write here!  RDB
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
7 posted 2006-12-17 01:01 AM




thank you so much Roniece!

MoonShadow
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Dark side of the Moon.
8 posted 2007-03-18 07:21 PM


I wake in your dream
warm myself  
by the fire of your face

  Lovely, simply lovely. The way you write, Milady... strokes the soul with wonderful words weaved with the hand of the heart.

             MoonShadow
.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
9 posted 2007-03-18 10:31 PM




thank you
gentle Sir MoonShadow
dreams are very special for me


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