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it rains |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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It rains in self interpretation though it plays in every language multilingual,and cultural signing in keys of both Christ and Messiah it rains a calypso of cummulus a banquet of butterflies from beyond the same curtain where the comet of haley has yet to to reveal itself it rains a pink panorama littering lawns with wet faces alliteration, run on sentences commas, apostrophies redundant this rain is it is , it is IT RAINS in the rhyme time of poetry and in the refinery of both prose and formality it rains over cloverdale cliffside and mountainhead bursting with watercolors stains on the silos remorse of the fallen ones and purity of those still in utero it rains in the background mostly in freeverse as i cling acrobatically to the threads of its trapeze. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-15-2006 03:31 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it rains in the background mostly in freeverse all I can say is "wow" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wait 'til I get my magnifying glass  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I admit it was a hard font to read, but well worth the effort. I love the ending, the way you cling to the trapeze. And the purity of those in utero, that made me reflect on how soon purity is lost. Excellent. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This read as a shower upon the mind Michelle. Drop by drop, leaving thoughts to linger on. Enjoyed. TD |
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