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Open Poetry #39

Brightly colored my love

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-12-13 11:16 PM

Brightly colored my love; we once were close to love,
Though you’ve ta’en from my chest, the reddest fruit,
I love you still.
What must I do, what must I say?
Kill me love!
I feel too much; let me feel no longer

I am the two-toed wanderer

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-12-15 02:39 PM

~sigh~ Matt
love's sad side portrayed

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-12-15 02:42 PM

Too sad

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2006-12-15 02:50 PM

Ah yes, the pain of lost love.
Take heart, it will come again, your heart is only bruised.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-12-15 05:22 PM

Ah, a broken heart indeed does pain.
You put it into words very well.

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

5 posted 2006-12-16 01:01 PM

Nicely done here mute. Being heartbroken SUCKS! Sad poem, but understood I can relate

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2006-12-16 01:02 PM

oh!

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

7 posted 2006-12-16 02:34 PM

thank you all sincerely.

I am the two-toed wanderer

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2006-12-16 04:32 PM

i know how it feels

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