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Beatrice Boyle
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0 posted 2006-12-13 04:09 AM



The lights are slowly dimming
The curtain's going up
The stagehands take take their places
The scenery's all set up
The orchestra is waiting
For the conductor to cue them in
The audience waits expectantly
For the overture to begin

The singers wait backstage
Sipping tea to warm their throats
Softly singing scales
Praying they'll hit their notes!
The actors mouth their lines
Hoping they won't forget
The Director paces back and forth
Nervous and upset!

After all the hassles
Of auditioning for the part
Months of rehearsals
And giving their all for art
They wait with baited breath
Whispering "This is it!"
Wishing each other luck
Hoping they have a hit


This isn't just a job to them
They love the work they do
And when they walk out on that stage
The audience loves them too!
Let's hear it for the show people
Who live to entertain you
After all the heartbreak and rejection
Their reward is applause from you!



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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-13 04:17 AM


Grandma Bea... you did a wonderful job of this - everyone loves the show people! RDB

btw: there is an double 'that' in the first verse

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-12-13 04:18 AM


nope make that 'take'
Beatrice Boyle
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3 posted 2006-12-13 05:37 AM


Thanks Romiece...don't know how that slipped by me...I did check for typos. (Must have been a senior moment.) Hell...I have senior MONTHS!

Grandma Bea

passing shadows
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4 posted 2006-12-13 07:57 AM



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2006-12-13 08:11 AM


Beatrice,
A delightful read, I enjoyed.

rhia_5779
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6 posted 2006-12-13 08:17 AM


This was entertaining but in the last line of the first stanza I think the meter and syllable count and rythmn could use a bit of tweaking also in second stanza near end.
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7 posted 2006-12-13 08:56 AM



Listen to the applause!!  

Well done!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Beatrice Boyle
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8 posted 2006-12-14 03:15 AM


Thanks Shadows...happy you enjoyed it.

Bea

Beatrice Boyle
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9 posted 2006-12-14 03:43 AM


Thanks Sy...Having trained for and participated in the theatre and music world, I know first hand that magical feeling.

There is no other in the world like it!

Bea

Grandma Bea

Beatrice Boyle
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10 posted 2006-12-14 03:46 AM


Rhia...as a musician, I write it as I speak it...it's all in the interpretation I guess.
Thanks for pointing it out.

Bea

Grandma Bea

Beatrice Boyle
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11 posted 2006-12-14 03:47 AM


Enchantress...thanks for all the applause...that's what keeps them going!

Bea

Grandma Bea

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