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Enchantress
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0 posted 2006-12-12 03:09 PM




How small and silent   the place
between two navels...
how short the stretch between the river
and the ocean

how reticent the voice
on the first word spoken
after prickly sweet obscenities
have surfaced,     & made the mark
in the throat.

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© Copyright 2006 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-12-12 03:12 PM


Nancy,
LOL are we talking about a hicky?
Well done enjoyed the read.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-12-12 03:18 PM


LOL..that was "In the throat" Sy..
not 'on the throat'..
You are such a dear man!  
With such a wicked sense of humour!

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3 posted 2006-12-12 04:22 PM


The space between them
two oranges on a tree
those succulent globes

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4 posted 2006-12-12 04:38 PM


giggling at Seymour.....

We do ponder interesting things...don't we?

luv & miss ya Teed !!

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-12 04:45 PM




Sir Sy made me giggle too
the rascal

oh Nancy
this is indeed lovely

short and breathtaking

Enchantress
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6 posted 2006-12-12 04:53 PM


'Loper~Absolutely love your reply.

Chris~Hi!  I'm still laughing at Sy!  Hugs.

Lady~Thank you so much for taking the time to read and reply.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-12-12 05:15 PM


definitely pondering here
Waterfall27
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8 posted 2006-12-12 05:50 PM


enjoyed the read

SmartChick
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9 posted 2006-12-12 07:46 PM


Much enjoyed Nancy. Hope you are doing well.
Enchantress
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10 posted 2006-12-12 07:51 PM


Dixie~Thank you sweet lady.
Good to see I'm not the only one pondering.

Christine~Thank you so much.   

Sue~I'm doing okay sweetie!  Hope you are too!  Sending big hugs your way.

scorpio
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11 posted 2006-12-12 08:26 PM


Yes Tinker..much to ponder in your write.  And Sy was doing a lot of pondering!! I truly enjoyed this.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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12 posted 2006-12-12 08:34 PM


Scorpio~Thank you so much.
Glad you enjoyed this ponder of thoughts.

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13 posted 2006-12-12 08:35 PM


Nance~

You ARE amazing ... and you set me to ponder~

(Psst ... my first reply on the new gift from Santa)
See ... you got the FIRST EMAIL ... and the FIRST REPLY ... and the FIRST *HUGLET*

Love you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -           noles1@totcon.com   

Enchantress
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14 posted 2006-12-12 09:04 PM


Marge~ I am the lucky one!!  How do I look on your new toy?  LOL...the same?
Okay.  
I thank you so much my friend.

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15 posted 2006-12-13 10:24 AM


  

Pondering not on what thoughts caused you to pen these wonderful words, Nancy... but pondering the marvelous things that it says to me.

   Thank you for a delightful rendering.

             MoonShadow

Martie
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16 posted 2006-12-13 10:31 AM


Nancy...my mind went the same way as Sy...not a bad place to be.  Lovely poem either way.  
Enchantress
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17 posted 2006-12-13 11:24 AM


Ken~Thank you for your reply..once again I am so pleased you came home.

Martie~Not a bad place to be at all.

arthur
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18 posted 2006-12-14 12:04 PM


dear nancy
its enough to make a sailor blush
arthur

Enchantress
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19 posted 2006-12-14 01:39 PM


Ah dear Michael...thank you.  
I take that as a compliment.

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20 posted 2006-12-17 03:57 PM


Lovely and thought provoking and I loved it - Paul
Enchantress
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21 posted 2006-12-17 04:27 PM


Paul~ Thank you so much...and happy holidays to you.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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22 posted 2006-12-17 06:53 PM


wonderful!  Happy Holidays to you my sweet friend! RDB
Enchantress
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23 posted 2006-12-17 07:23 PM


Roniece~Thank you for your reply and warm wishes.
Happy Holidays to you too!

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