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tatalinia
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0 posted 2006-12-12 12:08 PM


Would it be honest of me to sit here and lift you up
Boost your ego and tell you Iam interested when truely Iam not
Is it in your best interest to spit back at me because we don't click?
Simple as it may be just move on to the next chic
Maybe she is everything you want me to be and more
Out of niceness I tend to respond back
But don't for once think you have me on the right track

As the tide comes in and the sun goes down
Im not just your ordinary woman looking for a nice smile
I don't need charm and uplifting to impress me
Just a good man who knows what he wants that can lead me
By taking my hand and showing me a new way of thinking
A new way of life by the uniqueness of his character
Showing me originality over common portrayers
Then and only then will my heart respond

For as a girl I learned from my many mistakes
Taking whatever comes my way and thinking it is fate
Forever that is of my past but no more will I look at only one
This world is of many liars and cheats ready to prounce
So don't for a minute think you are the only one
Trust me when I say this you arent my only sweety
Nothing you say is any different then the others
So don't let it be a surprise if I don't want you after the first night

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

© Copyright 2006 Althia Kinsey - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-12-12 05:21 PM


gawd!! I love such brilliant honesty!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2006-12-12 06:31 PM


Those you want, encourage.
Those you don't want, discourage...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2006-12-14 03:57 AM


Wonderful honest writing here!  RDB
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