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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2006-12-12 09:32 AM



Glaze

We are always touching
Where white distills of snowflake sigh
Brushed tenderly of you and I
Delicate of night spree starlight
Two souls dance in silent night
My mind beats in time

As damp upon me as the rain
Stirs emotions soft refrain
We are always touching

Drizzled in compassionate gloss
Envelops silk consciousness thin as gauze
The night comes to quell my pale distress
When mood light showers sheer undress
A glaze of sentimental sweet

We are always touching love
When shared remember me, we meet

Copyright Kkh 12/12/06

© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-12-12 09:56 AM


ThisDiamond
A good write, enjoyed the read.

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2006-12-12 10:58 PM


Grand 'romantic' imagery!....such as:

"Where white distills of snowflake sigh
Brushed tenderly of you and I
Delicate of night spree starlight
Two souls dance in silent night
My mind beats in time"

V. enjoyable 'write'!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2006-12-13 04:39 AM


Kathleen I liked this write of yours RDB
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-12-13 08:04 AM


awesome!
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-13 11:01 PM




"We are always touching
Where white distills of snowflake sigh"

lovely TD

JL
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since 2004-04-01
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Texas, USA
6 posted 2006-12-14 02:18 PM


WOW!
Oh my!  
This is absolutely beautiful.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2006-12-14 03:46 PM


always
you touch
yes always

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