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Open Poetry #39

Bullets of Love

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-12-12 03:32 AM

Bullets of Love

Oh yeah, she had
a real nice smile,
but after awhile
I started feeling
like she was playing
games with me
and I didn't
want to play,
so I had to
put her away.

JamesLee
11December
2006

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2006-12-12 03:37 AM

I dont think anyone likes feeling used it definetly feels like a bullet piearcing the heart.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-12-12 07:32 AM

best to go with your gut

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2006-12-12 09:57 PM

ooh James - 'put her away' does this mean you shot her?

nice write RDB

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2006-12-13 07:11 PM

Thank you trutodaraiders, passing shadows and Roneice for the nice responses...
Roneice, good call...this is about a hit man...but it is also about women that play games, and I don't want to play...and its also about a Hong Kong movie called "Bullets of Love"...among other things...James

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-12-13 10:18 PM

nice job James...

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