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Sunshine
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0 posted 2006-12-12 12:38 PM



Santa’s Winter Dance Steppes




Frozen winter gleams
Female skirts trimmed brightly white
Ballooning dance stepped
Offspring waiting, watchful eyes
Might some wind reveal surprise?





© Copyright 2006 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-12-12 03:27 AM


Nicely done. I love that picture.
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2 posted 2006-12-12 03:36 AM


Its looking like Christmas...James
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3 posted 2006-12-12 07:26 AM


I do love the way you see Christmas
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4 posted 2006-12-12 08:36 AM


So very beaututiful with a touch of whimsy.
If I look at the picture long enough..
I can imagine those trees starting to waltz.

AND  Happy Birthday sweet lady!!!  

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

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5 posted 2006-12-12 04:19 PM




you are Christmas Sunshine
shining all over the place
Karilea

I see those pretty white skirts
and I want one!  

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6 posted 2006-12-12 04:26 PM


Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!
You rhymed a Tanka!
Don't you feel shame and remorse?
What an absolutley lovely write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2006-12-29 07:21 PM


nice read
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8 posted 2006-12-29 07:27 PM


Sunshine,

    Loved the picture and description!  You have a VERY good eye!!!  I adore the photos you take that accompany your poetry.  Thanks for sharing.   Here's to a great new 2007!

miscellanea
  

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