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themute
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0 posted 2006-12-11 10:57 PM


Resting thoughts on edificium

I was sleep, resting far before dawn
on the resting rocks of  edificium;
Where we are of the ones whom cry,
Where sentiments are felt and yawn
By the waves of discomfort and sensitivity—
Slowly rising, cresting, then to fall, depressingly.
Oh, the mustered strength to rise;
Rise gain, ‘til ‘pon the breakers extinctum;
For I and love reside the pinnacle.

edificium>L.structure.
extinctum>L.extinguished, put out.

I am the two-toed wanderer

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FNG
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since 2006-02-07
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1 posted 2006-12-11 11:58 PM


Nice

"By the waves of discomfort and sensitivity—
Slowly rising, cresting, then to fall, depressingly.
Oh, the mustered strength to rise;
Rise gain, ‘til ‘pon the breakers extinctum;
For I and love reside the pinnacle."

FNG

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