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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-12-11 02:14 PM



perfect preamble
I will hold you tenderly
stroke your silky skin
when your eyes allow conquest
we will tremor in our love

Inspired by: /pip/Forum96/HTML/002132.html

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
superbee
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1 posted 2006-12-11 02:21 PM


B~E~A~U~tiful

Superbee

Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2006-12-11 02:27 PM


Opps I was replying as my roomate he forgot otlog off..he's superbee trust me from sun up to sun down go go go!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-12-11 04:11 PM




oh my
for once I am speechless
almost...

Interloper
it's so lovely
it's just... lovely

Kate

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4 posted 2006-12-11 04:51 PM


Beautiful words Interloper..
Love this one!

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2006-12-11 05:40 PM


Interloper
A delight to read.

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just out of reach
6 posted 2006-12-11 10:06 PM


Ooooh, lovely write this.
hugs, Chris

Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~

passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-12-11 10:46 PM


I love it when you get inspired!
Sunshine
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8 posted 2006-12-12 10:16 AM



Flawless!

  

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2006-12-12 10:39 AM


Instilled in me
The following of dawn's verse
Reaching pinnacle

You are very good at being inspired.

Nicely done...both artistic treasures.

TD

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