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Open Poetry #39

Touched The Soul Of Thee

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2006-12-10 12:06 PM

I’ve held you in my arms before –
So close were you to me,
Then kissed the lips I longed for,
And touched the soul of thee,
At night I’ve loved you often,
When our passions overcame,
The souls who longed to hurt us,
Those who wouldn’t play the game,
But in us we felt the longing,
The one whose love was true,
Who wanted to feel the joys in life,
Like the joys I found in you,
I’ll tremble when I touch you,
Cry when our souls unite,
Then soar among the angels,
When I feel your soul's delight,
And when that day arrives,
When as one we’ll surely be,
I will have known no greater joy,
For I touched the soul of thee.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2006-12-10 03:09 AM

Lots of very nice romantic poetic expression in this piece.

Eric

stevepoet
Junior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 46

2 posted 2006-12-10 05:43 AM

very nice.Good rhyming and the words kept me interested.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

3 posted 2006-12-10 05:44 AM

what a beautiful write Bill and a lovely read... RDB

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