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passing shadows
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0 posted 2006-12-09 08:13 AM




Once friends, I never told you how
to live your life a way,
or put down what you do or say
because it was only my opinion
and I kept it to myself,
a person has a right to feel what they want.

Once friends, I never told you how
boring your diary has become,
the same thing written over and over again.
I simply read and nodded my head,
offering a hug now and then.
Some just like to be alone sometimes.

Once friends, I never told you how
you were pushing me away from you,
in being so judgemental of me
when you really have no clue.




A poem begins with a lump in the throat.
~Robert Frost

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (12-09-2006 09:23 AM).]

© Copyright 2006 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Angel4aKing
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1 posted 2006-12-09 12:17 PM


this almost made me cry...I hope you find away to work it out with your friend...friends are a dear gift and hard to come  by....take care...

kingsangel

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2006-12-09 01:59 PM


This poem made me sad. Only because I know what it is like to have to push a friend away because i was not living my life through her eyes. A great friend will tell you your downfalls and extend their hand to help pick you up.
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-12-09 09:08 PM


Startling, these powerful observations here Dixie...
Wow!  For many reasons.
TD

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-12-09 09:22 PM


Nice writing...James
The Lady
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5 posted 2006-12-09 10:17 PM



outstanding Dixie!


Larry C
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6 posted 2006-12-09 10:26 PM


Ouch. Dixie, I hope all is well. Truth can certainly hurt and should not always be told. And yet...  

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-12-09 10:36 PM


I thank everyone

some friends can be the greatest experts on things they've never encountered for themselves, and they really don't understand life through another's eyes or words, but they judge anyhow, and what makes it worse is that their own lives aren't exactly peachy...

though not meaning to hurt, sometimes they do

sad indeed


1slick_lady
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8 posted 2006-12-09 10:44 PM


dix you will always be ok in my book
and if ya ever need a place you will always be...home with me...love ya girl

passing shadows
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9 posted 2006-12-09 10:52 PM


awww Helen, you are like a beam of sunshine in a cloudy sky

love ya

Juju
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10 posted 2006-12-09 10:55 PM


I love this

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

latearrival
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11 posted 2006-12-10 01:53 AM


Dixie, once in a while we just outgrow each other. No one grows within another's judgmental eyes. Time to just walk away. You Are Loved
ethome
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12 posted 2006-12-10 02:56 AM


Wow this is a tug on the heart strings. Well expressed.

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2006-12-10 05:49 AM


beautiful!  True friends don't judge, but are there to love the good and bad in you ...  a very good write!  RDB
stevepoet
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14 posted 2006-12-10 05:50 AM


very nice!
SmartChick
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15 posted 2006-12-10 06:30 PM


Dixie, my friend, sounds like you are upset. But, you epressed it very well, here.
I have been trying to catch you, but I never see you, anymore.

Enchantress
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16 posted 2006-12-10 06:35 PM


So sad sweet lady...

Sing in me muse...
and through me tell the story~

sweetberry
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17 posted 2006-12-11 01:14 AM


I Loved It, Miss Dixie

It's always those people in glass houses

throwing stones!!!

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