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spiked4
Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35
Hammond, La

0 posted 2006-12-08 10:13 PM


Emotional containment
Your the pawn that she seeks
to vent all her anger
Realizing she's wrong
Results of her mistakes
And now in part were gone
No longer do I wake
And see your happy smile
No longer have you jump
On top of the pile
For you are still my little king
In this daddy's eyes
The love you always bring
Forever we are tied
To one another

© Copyright 2006 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-12-08 10:27 PM


we all love our Daddys!  Welcome to Passions, this is a nice write...  RDB
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2006-12-08 11:29 PM


B~E~A~UTIFUL!!!!

kingsangel

spiked4
Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35
Hammond, La
3 posted 2006-12-09 02:30 PM


Thank you I've been here for a while need my old pass to get my identity back. but after a few years good to write again or at least make an attempt
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2006-12-09 04:33 PM


It's good to see you here again lovie...

give us a call, will ya?

G is waiting to hear from you too.



Miss you!

(and I wasn't gonna reply to this until you wrote me--but then, smile, I'd forgotten how stubborn you can be. )

Hope everything is well with you.

spiked4
Junior Member
since 2006-12-07
Posts 35
Hammond, La
5 posted 2006-12-09 04:37 PM


thanks serene
have email trouble right now


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2006-12-09 04:41 PM


It is good to see a fellow member returning. Welcome back.
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