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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2006-12-08 02:59 PM



I meant to say thank you
as you were walking away
I hope you know that
it was my mistake
so many masks
so many foolish lies
so much confusion
and clouds behind my eyes
bitterness seeped in
and anger drew
an ugly face
the beauty
of what
our love coulda been
had been replaced
now....
all of our tracks retraced
and her deception
becomes my  grace.....


kingsangel

© Copyright 2006 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-12-08 08:07 PM


Julie... you have such grace and style in your write.... enjoyed this very much..

We all need to say 'thank you' to remind us we appreciate others for who they are..  thank you Ms Julie, I appreciate your writings very much!  RDB

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2006-12-09 01:28 PM


Thank you so much for your reply..i am glad you enjoyed

kingsangel

superbee
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since 2006-11-28
Posts 7
USA
3 posted 2006-12-11 06:00 AM


very good indeed Angel....
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