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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-12-08 01:28 PM



DR. Love says
that we have
a 99% chance of working out
I wonder?
what does DR. Love know?
he must have looked
into my heart..
he must have seen
all those
heart shaped bubbles
floating
straight
to your front door
he must have heard
that angel
sighing...
on your pillow at night
he must have heard her whisper
"she loves you Bob, not her"
He must have felt my tears
falling like raindrops
on the steal roof of your heart
he must have heard
and won't give up...
as long as we're apart...


kingsangel

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (12-08-2006 03:00 PM).]

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-08 07:38 PM


Julie... this was lovely - heartfelt and lovely!  RDB
Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2006-12-09 03:28 PM


thanx aain fro your replies...you are too sweet....

kingsangel

superbee
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3 posted 2006-12-11 06:02 AM


And Dr's have practice Angel so they oughtta know
marcel
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4 posted 2006-12-11 05:56 PM


warmly sentimented...hearts apart stretch the boundaries of love.....
MoonShadow
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5 posted 2006-12-11 06:00 PM


"Tears falling like raindrops on the steel roof of your heart."

  Excellent imagery, Angel. Strong and powerful.


Larry C
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6 posted 2006-12-11 06:08 PM


And it appears, you shouldn't give up either.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-12-11 09:58 PM




"he must have heard
that angel
sighing..."

he did Angel
and this is lovely


Jess
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8 posted 2006-12-11 10:16 PM


Perhaps some love potion #9 would do the trick? Anyway, this is lovely... One of those poems that make you smile and sigh when you read it.
Angel4aKing
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9 posted 2006-12-12 01:19 PM


Thank  you evrybody for your replies...

Jess~~~Got a recipe?

~~~kingsangel~~~

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