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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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my hands are the crows of stone on perch not to fly but to cry with finger pluck the beaking strike on the bites of sound songs symbol by symbol on broken wing there are walls with leaves flat faced they peer at my eyes to catch my winds and bend them lest there is flight through keyholes and the locks of a lover's dreams are picnicked spoonless empty sighs left as stains on a bosom's shimmering like a hurried licking's leftovers without the sabbath's refrigeration _____________ daark scribblenote: penspeak, wordspit, waiting to exit the orifice of the poet's mind in some logical order |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
better to be a woodpecker in such a circumstance lovie... crows? Just caw the whole night long and never get a damned thing done.  well, that's been my experience anyhoo... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
karen, it does seem that way sometimes when the hands are perched waiting to peck out something of value huh..well mine anyway...thanks babe sighs are love songs |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 c'mere you Don't work the stars of game show hosts--it demeans you baby. write me a poem |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A place we have all been to at some time m'friend.... and yet the same the need is sometimes so great, that we write about the need just to write ah...but when your pen speaks oh how blessed we are btw...love your new sig line.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms karen, (and I fear no evil cause I am demean) a poem for you? they all are no? (grin) bourbon street serene you wear the morning edges like sighs on velvet moments something jazzy with wickedry but a little girl giggles and your fingers are hers when you cover your mouth and smile another day's dawn with the tears of a woman's eyes _______________________ ms gs, thanks for the eye play ms. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A double header... wunderbar! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady friend |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh my, the title poem is fine. But then the one thrown into the reply string-it makes me gasp. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan, thanks twice for the read. Hope it makes her smile too. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
makes logical order to me Mr Dark! enjoyed the read RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger even with crows of stone your words are brilliant |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bruce, thanks lady friend ______________ ladyone, thanks hon for being close |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
there are walls with leaves flat faced they peer at my eyes to catch my winds and bend them my faovorite stance.. I almost missed this one... kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul, thanks for standing that way and for the read |
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