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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced 
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At times, I do fear losing you, when days go by and we don't speak, when I have no time to come to you when your moments are weak. And then there's times I just don't care, better off without you there. At times, I feel you close and I reach out to touch, usually when you have no time when I need so much. And then there's times I just don't care, better off without you there. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
OH YES !! that's where I'm at now!  a nice read RDB |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
yeah girl tell em..fell you on that 1 |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Just keep your mind and self busy.. You Are Loved [This message has been edited by latearrival (12-08-2006 04:29 AM).] |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Well here you go again, you just never hide Dixie, just bring everything outfront and let people pick over the things they like, but then i like all of it?..Thank you.. Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
The fear of losing dissipates and goes away... with the realization that loss has already happened... and we move on. Thank you for sharing a write of emotion that typifies many. Nice Job. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
You are a master of expressing relationships, but you knew that, didn't you? Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
yep! I like this for sure! "And then there's times I just don't care, better off without you there." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Understanding this Dixie , Yes I know , they do have our emotions going to and fro Hope |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Those yo-yo feelings can be hard to deal with. Nicely stated. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you all lovely comments |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
At times, I feel you close and I reach out to touch, usually when you have no time when I need so much. And then there's times I just don't care, better off without you there... I know what you are saying here... You express words for many of us.  M |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
We've all been here before.....it's like love in an elevator.....one day it's up the next it's down...take care.... kingsangel |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
love seems to make no sense...why can't it be easier...why can't trust and distance be true to the heart...your words express those questions........... |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
In love, we still need individuality and space...love is a hard nut to crack. agreeing with you here. FNG |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Hi, My name is June. I'm new here, and this is the first comment I'm making on this site. I full out enjoyed this piece, it rolls easily off the tongue. Most importantly, it has the ring of truth and authenticity about it. Actually, I think you hit the bottom line of what happens in all our relationships at some time or another. Fortunately, we all survive, to various degrees. Thank you for your truthiness and add me to your list of admirers. *To thy own self be true To thy own self be true |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
lovely poem, i have thought these words, but differently. I am the two-toed wanderer |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks everyone  June, nice to meet you. I'm glad you have come to join our circle of friends. I look forward to reading your poetry. |
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